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Presentation board – Formative

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From my formative presentation board I received some feedback from people and they had thought the first logo looked really placed and not merged in with the logo. Then I received feedback from the second logo at the bottom where people had said the family bakery on the top doesn’t make sense because people generally think read from up to down.

To move forward with my ideas I will start to think about where I can place my tagline and if changing the font will help improve the way the logo looks.


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